Comments : I Promise

  • 15 years ago

    by XdangerouslyXgenuineX

    This has a lot of repitition of "i promise"
    i think you should have either kept with the flow
    of a sentence to a line
    or one huge paragraph
    because it visually unattractive
    this is a good poem love
    feel free to look at any of mine
    i enjoy constructive criticism

    good job hun :]