Do you look in the mirror
How ever you feel
Are you sick of the words that mean nothing
But that is what you fear
To be nothing
Isn't it?

^^ i love the poems that make me cry by the second or third line. i mean, really. that's why your poems amaze me, they can make me cry that fast.

Turn your music so loud
You can't hear what they say
No when can hear
What you are thinking
Or can they?

^^ favourite stanza.

5/5

Excellent poem, well done. xx

'How ever do you feel' is pretty much the same as 'How do you feel', just more formal. Or am I wrong in this case?

This poem really got to me bro. 5/5

"That thought, gave you cold thrills
Down your spine
Just like mine
Explodes in your ear
Then left things quiet
You the hate quiet"

I really liked this poem and enjoyed reading it. I liked the last 3 stanzas more then the rest of the poem though. Nicely worded. The flow did seem to be off in places. But was better in the last 3 stanzas.

I rated it a 5/5