I like it very much 5/5 :-)

I love this title, considering usually tripping means falling, but you said up instead of down, very nice. The poem in the entiretywas a very pretty form of art. I enjoyed the way you spoke of love and the way your poem presented it being all the things that make you fall for a person. The only little thing I would suggest is to broaden your vocabulary. I remember when a few people gave me this advice and it really helped although it took me awhile to get it down, even now I'm not completely used to a stronger vocabulary. I really enjoyed this poem. Thanks for commenting my poetry, I added you as a favorite so I can check in and view your poems and comment you back!

Wow Cara, this was one of the best poems that I have read. I really loved the clever way that you wrote it. You really put a vivid picture in my mind of how much you love this guy. 5/5

Great poem! I love it! Keep up the good work...

It takes a lot to give away a heart and trust someone that they will not break it...great poem!

I really enjoy reading this poem. So many of us can realates to this topic of love. There are not another feeling that brings so much comforts and desire to the mind, than love. It makes us go beyond our wildest dreams for the one we love. Very well done Cara. It merits 5/5, keep it up, kel.

Aww thats a very sweet poem Cara and i'm sure your friend nust have been very happy to have recieved it.
Love does strange things to us does it not?
Well written

Grant

Wow this is really sweet.

From the first time you spoke to me I knew this was true
I could tell your love for me, nothing could undo
You are like a little kid, tripping me up
Because baby I feel head over heels for you

My favourite Stanza ober awesome

Some of the lines are too common and very much known. I didn't find any new creative approach on those. So according to me it's good in parts. Just my personal opinion... that's it!

This si a great pice and you outdone your self in this
it have been a long time since you writen ,it is really missed
you chosen great adn simple words to say
what you feel for your love and in what way

you should be proud you write simple and clear
and you was not shy , and from courage and not from fear
bravo you outdone yourslef this time
it is very gdo that you spoke up not like a mime

great you deserver the five on this part
and you shall get it by god from all my heart

5

Aw! so very sweet indeed!
I am sure you melted his heart with this sweet dedication of love:)))

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sweet action poetry. like an awsome movie you know. lol 5/5 in the book of great poetry.