=) i read it like 6 times back to back. love the end stanza. <3

=) i read it like 6 times back to back. love the end stanza. <3

This is a very good piece of poetry, the best advice i could give you is though, it needs some rhythm into it, if it had a nice flow, it would be by far one of the best i've read on this site.. keep your head up and keep comin with the good work.. you got talent sweetie

Superb write 5/5