Hey this is really good
Keep up the good work
5/5

Slice my body open
Watch my skin draw tight
Bleeding out my lovely wounds
That you gouge deeper here tonight

*This was my favorite stanza. Everything about it draws my attention and makes me want to read more. I think this was one of your best poems. It had so many emotions, all clearly expressed. I love the dark imagery as well. Nice work. Nik*