Omg i liked this so much great job i loved it.it flowed well together and whom ever you wrote this for is one lucky girl!

She dumped me fore my brother-like friend. she cheated on me several times and used me to get to him... i still love her tho...

Wow. this is really good.
keep writing.
anp<3

U've got talent , i like this poem i like the real feeling towards ur lover
good luck & waiting for more poem
5/5 :)

Just down right amazing.
i could relate. :)
great jobb. my favorite..so far. :D