I really like this poem, well done it has a lot of feeling, congrats 5/5

Wow Jen I really like the idea of you reversing the things that rainbows are being associated with. I think that this idea is very original. the rhythm and flow was also great

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

Mmm, well ,
i like ITT:D
specialy the colors meaning at first where amaizinig !

the rest are good , naturaly you dont write from emotions but as a meaning i wish no one have this experience .
^_^

it is a very hard emptions to feel .

as usal i can not give you excoet 5 but this time i am very very liking this 5 because i like it .

greaty
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