i dont know how else to describe it.
definitely a good right.
12 years ago
The sky's the limit with your poerty, im left astounded after every line. as always the flow and description is precise, you paint a picture in the readers mind with bright colours and sweet scents. another 5* fowshow =)
A very nice poem, very sweet and sensual, though your last 2nd last line made me falter a bit when reading, like it was missing a syllable or something. Overall though very enjoyable, I especially liked your second stanza, good description. Keep up the great work.