Comments : Strength and Love

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Bravo. This is a wonderful poem and Karan did a good job on creating this form. Excellent write. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    This was so sweet Crystal. I am happy to see that you used the poetry form that Karan created for you. It is so romantic.

    "Rose Gardens
    Their fragrance fill the air
    Essence of his love is everywhere"
    These were my favorite lines, they were so beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Parallelogram de Crystalline eh?
    i think i might giv it a go, the example you leav us here is phenomenal. it has flow it has elegance, and with such a great feel from the outset. ill definatly read this more than 1nce. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful description of love! It just had me smiling because I know each word came straight from your heart. Karan did an excellent job on creating this form and you did a wonderful job of bringing it to life.

    Well done!
    *5/5* :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Sourav

    I think the whole poem is written very well. Nicely constructed lines with emotion. Great to read.