Excellent poem, i loved it very deep and powerful.

tuitles could be Alone. Cold. Just Another Life? Twisting Tunnels?

keep writing xx

Cold, alone
Taking her last breath
Razor blade in her hand
Waiting to be taken by death
^^ maybe play with the words here this stanza could have amazing potential! instead of cold maybe put "shivering" and instead of taking put "gasping for her" replace waiting with "anticipating the arrival of death" see just play with it!

No one ever saw her pain
No one took hold of her hand
No one grabbed it and held on tight
Supported her, and helped her stand
^^continue with the repetition in the last line!! other than that good job : )

No one saw her potential
No one led the way
Through the twisting tunnels of life
And granted her another day
^^ the flow is right on!

Now shes just another life
Taken whilst yet to live
She had so much to offer
So much left to give
^^great ending!!
as for a title suggestion maybe "razorblades and letdowns" or "Beauty in the Breakdown"
just some suggestions! tell me what you decide
5/5

Oh and try to add some punctuation it helps make it look more professional !

It seems to say 'no one' a lot, so 'no one' as a title?
i don't know, i have the same trouble finding titles for my poems haha.
good poem, though [=

I liked this one as well.
Hmm... titles....
Lost Soul. A Life, Lost. A Little Girl's Sorrows.
This was a well done poem.
5/5
Ciaoxx