Comments : Just The Thought Of You

  • Omg this is beautiful i love it

  • 15 years ago

    by Poetic Grunt

    Just the thought of you
    (Thats all) it takes to make me turn blue.
    Sometimes I wonder why
    I even bothered to give (you) a try.
    You hurt me in more ways that one
    Now it's like you have already won.
    Won the battle that I (we) have been fighting
    (Thought) you were a flame just enlighting.
    I thought you were (at least) happy with me
    If you (were'nt) then why didn't you (just) let me be?
    You could have left me alone there (alone) in the dark
    But instead you cut me with the edges of my broken heart.
    (And now just thinking of you)
    Is enough to make someone lose.

    just putting in my two cents, a good poem all around especially the broken heart part. thats freakin good.