You asked me for the truth;;so here goes:
I do like it, because I like the emotion of it. But it is kind of random and the rhyme scheme is on and off. It's a good poem, like I said it would be(; It seems to come from the heart.

I really like this
its cute and its written well
and your a verry good writer
5/5

p.s. thanks for ur comment :)

I love all of your poetry.
he ones i read anyways.
:))
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
thanks love!

-jesss.
Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)