Excellent use of Karan's new form. Vivid images you have portrayed with your words. The nice thing about the form and your use of it, is that each verse can stand alone as a poem of its own. Good job as usual. 5/5

You have written this with such intense passion, thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

sadaddy

Wow! Such great imagery here Ingrid.
I felt the fire coming out of your words.
Very nicely penned indeed.
Well done!