Beautifully written. this poem is amazing. full of emotion and depth. i love it.
--lovedroughtmelody

Wow!
This poem is truely powerful. It has lots of enrgy put into it with not so much energy needed to do so..(if you get what I mean?).
I loved the start!
Whispers of forgotten dreams
Float around my bedroom.
^
This really gets us wanting to read more and more. You provided us with an interesting poem with great use of words!

however I think you need to be careful with the length of your stanzas in this poem as some are 3 lines and some 4. I'm not sure if this is intended? Netherthless a great write.

Natalia