Very well written. Seriously, if there was ever a moment to prove that poetry doesn't need to rhyme it's right here.

Every theing was very, well, eloquent. Every adjective, every verb, every detail, and every change in emotions, were well placed and thought out carefully. The work of a writer obviously, not just an "emo" amateur.

I must say though, there were minor mistakes, but who doesn't make them? Nothing to worry about, just a few syllables clashing here and there. No worries.

This was by far the best part in your poem, in my opinion:

"I am still in debt to your lustrous voice.
Your bass thunder to my soprano birdsong
In harmony, like the sun and sky:
Peaceful, yet ever-owing."

"Your bass thunder to my soprano birdsong"

That was great, it really was. Added an element of drama and "edgyness" to the work.

Good job. =D 5/5 for sure.

Great Job!!! This was very very very...well written! You are a very talented writer! 5/5! Keep it up! *jennifer*

Wow.. Its beautiful. I love it!!!!!