So wonderfully penned.. writer's block is really frustrating ...

The letters swirl
Within my mind
And yet those words
I can not find
^^
it happens all the time...
so many readers can relate to it ... I try to prtray something but words fail me... sometimes I feel as if words are too little a medium to express our emotions...

excellently penned...
keep writing ..

Well this poem is is beautifully penned down.Yeah as poets we do go through a writer's block but well if you hadn't had tt u wouldn't have written this great piece. Eventhough it's short i get the messgae tt u tried to convey.Keep on writing

Excellent Job

Ha ha ha. That made me laugh.

Ok that was all that I was going to write/type but I remembered just how much I hate one liners. So I decided to type a bit of useless blabber until I could think of something witty to say.

You seemed to fill your verses simple rhymes. This made the poem fill a little childish to me, but what do I know. Even though it seem simple there was a big voice behind the word which gave your poem more voice. I just wish that you would. Be able to push your vocabulary a bit more so that you can add a force behind your voice.