Comments : Telling You The Truth

  • 15 years ago

    by SADADDY

    You have expressed your heart felt emotions in this write, thank you for sharing them with us.
    Building a long lasting relationship first starts with friendship then moves on from there.

    sadaddy

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow, this was very good. The pain of really feeling like you love two people at once can get quite complicated. Very nice poem. The emotions really flowed nicely.
    The rhyming was good in this one two. So well done :]