Comments : How Could You?

  • 15 years ago

    by Gem

    "But as soon as i didn't play the game by your rules;
    I was giving the 3rd degree."

    People like that shouldn't be allowed to have relationships. they have no idea of the pain they can cause and you portayed that so well in this poem.
    I liked the tint of hope in the last stanza, that life can go on.
    5/5
    Gem