Comments : What Bridge?

  • 15 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is so different than anything else you've written, in my opinion. It's deep, yet so obvious at some parts. I love the mix. I don't have much more to say to it, other than it's really good (:

    Ily xocozo

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    The poem overall is extraordinary, wonderful.
    This stanza is the best:
    "All these things might just paint me desperate,
    I've got the matches but no bridge to burn.
    I've got the fire but no eyes to light,
    Watch as the wind changes, these paper hearts of ours."
    It just moved all my emotions at once.