Comments : My Love (Rondelet)

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww Crystal! What a beautiful poem that does nothing better than express your love to Karan. This is gorgeous.. what a complicated form to use too.. there are three lines that repeat and the other two you really have to make superb so that the poem is a masterpiece.. I think you did just that..

    Well done!

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This is absolutely beautiful and an excellent write. Nothing else need be said. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow that was so beautiful. I loved how you used the white rose to describe your pure love for Karan. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Faithless

    The poem was such a delighful to read...so simple yet beautiful...Karan must be a lucky guy to have u;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Cara

    This is so beautiful. It really does show your love for Karan perfectly. You wrote it in a complicated form, but still made it shine.
    Im sure Karan absolutely loved it.
    Such a beautiful poem.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Krista

    This was beautiful. The emotions were absolutley blissful. It made me smile. You do love him a lot.
    Take care,
    krista

  • 11 years ago

    by Krista

    This was beautiful. The emotions were absolutley blissful. It made me smile. You do love him a lot.
    Take care,
    krista

  • 11 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This is such a beautiful poem, Crystal. :) Karan's a lucky man. 5/5