Aww Crystal! What a beautiful poem that does nothing better than express your love to Karan. This is gorgeous.. what a complicated form to use too.. there are three lines that repeat and the other two you really have to make superb so that the poem is a masterpiece.. I think you did just that..

Well done!

5/5

This is absolutely beautiful and an excellent write. Nothing else need be said. 5/5

Wow that was so beautiful. I loved how you used the white rose to describe your pure love for Karan. 5/5

The poem was such a delighful to read...so simple yet beautiful...Karan must be a lucky guy to have u;)

This is so beautiful. It really does show your love for Karan perfectly. You wrote it in a complicated form, but still made it shine.
Im sure Karan absolutely loved it.
Such a beautiful poem.
5/5

This was beautiful. The emotions were absolutley blissful. It made me smile. You do love him a lot.
Take care,
krista

This was beautiful. The emotions were absolutley blissful. It made me smile. You do love him a lot.
Take care,
krista

This is such a beautiful poem, Crystal. :) Karan's a lucky man. 5/5