Alone is the word. Alone in the world.

what an amazing line to start the poem with..no seriously, I'm speechless..
I love every word and line in your poem..Sarah you came back just the way you used to be..coming up with fascinating and stunning poetry :]

I loved the flow of the poem..it went really well and fast..although so fast that I wanted to enjoy some more lines of it..so sad..
But the simplicity in the length of the poem was done with so much talent.

I love the first stanza most..it totally rocked the whole entire piece..the last three stanzas were very intelligently written :)
I just love this piece..it's one of my fave for you
Very well done babe
Keep 'em coming !!
xx

Last three lines **

Absolutely fantastic
definetly going into my favourites

what a way to begin and what a way to end !!

keep the favourites coming ;)