Interesting, i like the structure and the length is perfect. i actually havnt got anything bad to say about this one. not that id say anything bad, i try and write/type constructive critiscism..{SP} its getting late so my brain isnt really functioning properly..back to the poem, i think its awesome so go on you. hope you get inspired at everything. did you compose a snow poem yet? mine is still in progress. so whenever your ready to compare just let me know. ibe