Comments : No love in life(No body loves me)

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I like the idea that these words are raw that came straight pouring out from the heart.
    Well i just hope that you do not feel this way about urself

    Take care
    -Azzza

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Don't mind people hun, you don't need friends who treat you this way...
    Many huggs xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by LoveTear

    Ya Rabb it's difficult when u get depressed really it is...u start to see things which r not the real things, u start to feel u r good 4nothing, that none loves u or take care of u...but despite all is it not that way ! Remeber my dear our happiness depends only of our way of thinking abt things in our lives.Allah Hakim behind that pain should be something good !

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Heba, your poem is great and you express your emotions very well. I can really feel your sadness. I hope if this is only a poem and not your thoughts because you have such a beautiful personality and everyone sees this! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by sania Ahmed

    Heba well done.very nice poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Very well expressed poem; i can feel each word u say, however u must NOT be weak n prefer 2go away, u rather try 2find the one who deserves u n ignore all others.. 5/5
    Regards,
    Shokry

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    I just ran across your poem. How sad :( I hope by now you're feeling better... you are young and have the entire world to explore.
    Take Care of yourself
    and remember you are never alone
    God Bless
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by IBRAHIM DWIDAR

    Hard feelings , i liked the poem and the rhythm a lot , but i really hope that ur current feeling is not so bad like this, i hope u start having different look to the word around u if this poem really describe ur current mood.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Very nice poem.. it flows well right

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    This piece describes you as a person and what you were going through perfectly! Heba, you know I love you and care about you, you do have people that care as much as I do too. Don't listen to those who wish to crush you and let you down.
    As for the poetry, I think you should organize your rhymes more. It'll help with the rhythem of the poem and its flow.

    Keep writing love...

  • 9 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    "to sleep . . . perchance to dream.
    Aye, there's the rub."
    - Shakespeare

    Better to sort it out here than chance what happens after.