Wow this poem is incredible!

5/5,

great display of emotions and feelings, whoever that person is, he is very lucky!

keep up the good work =]

I need him to hold me tight though the night
*through.
Other than that you expressed your feelings pretty good. I just feel it was missing a little bit of passion maybe..just a bit, not much. However it was still creative and I think it deserves a 4/5

I really like this poem too... whoever he is he's a very lucky guy cuz hes takin over ur poetry... i really liked it 5/5!!