This is a lovely poem you are to be commended :D

Such preciseness in your words :D and you can tell that you mean everything that your saying :)

I would call this poem *True Love* Or *Wishing On A Star* :D x

Loved this, a very beautiful piece, i suggest maybe "what did we fall into" or "seen through my eyes"

Well it goes to the beat of im yours by jason mraz
cause i havent perfected my guitar skills yet