I liked how u rhymed it. U really have to stay with it to know where your going and thats a good thing.

nice write

~tia

A really great poem it had an excellent flow, i also liked how on the first stanza everything seems picture perfect as the title suggest but then everything unravels and the last stanza which is my favourite has been written to perfection and shows the reality of things
defintely a great read
Xx5/5xX

Oh wow, how awesome...

This is phenomenal.
You're SUCH a great writer!

5/5, well deserved. The flow was fantastic and the words you chose were very strong.
I was interested the whole way though.

Great job!

-Osi

I'm going to be honest.
My intention was to read Path. But this title was so intriguing(intriging) I had to read this one first. I love my decision to do so.!. :)
This poem is to Exquisite for my words. As cliche as it may be I found this poem Beautiful. The description, emotion, wording, the words, everything.!. Was well...Perfect(: I've said it before, and I'll say it again. I love how you write.!. You have major talent, you use it well(:
Outstanding job.