I so loved it! X] i can so relate to it. its a 5/5

Woah there's someone named grace too =].
well i loved this of course. my favorite part was the "sea of flames". well done my friend!

Sometimes, no matter how many chances people get, they never change and we will alwyas find this out the hard way, with a broken heart. Beautifully written, 5/5. Em