Not bad for your first poem like this. I write them often, so I thought I could point out a few things.

In the very first line, you used the word HELD, which is past tense, but the rest of the poem uses present tense words. You may want to change the first line.

In the third stanza, LOCK should be LOCKED. In the next stanza, I like the "Rubbing my chest and biting my neck" line, but it would sound better if you seperated it into two seperate lines. Maybe something like this:

I take of my pants,
Panties come next,
As he's rubbing my chest
And biting my neck.

I think it flows better, but thats just my opinion.

Throughout the poem, you rhymed CLIT and IT quite a bit (and no, I did not mean to rhyme A BIT with CLIT / IT). Over using the rhymer lessens the meaning behind it. I suggest changing it up some. I also noticed that you took your pants off three times: in the forth, seventh, and tenth stanzas. That confused me and forced me to re-read it a few times.

A few stanzas completely miss the rhyme scheme, which hurt the flow from line to line.

Overwise, it is a good poem. The imagery was pretty good and it seems that you gave a lot of though to the words. Your writing will improve with time.

I would say 4/5, but I vote harshly. I will not leave a vote as I hate getting a 4 off of the first vote.

Good job.

Had me pantin darling...very nice!!!