Comments : Sasha (series of Haikus)

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Determined 'till death
    To find her own way in life
    Unfailing herself

    -Here you have shown that failing is
    not an option for you

    With so much to show
    She looks into the mirror
    With her face aglow

    -This stanza depicts that there
    is more than meets the eye

    They told you, you can't
    But you are sure that you can
    Don't listen to them

    -I love the determination that you have
    but real friends are those who let you
    spread out your wings and fly

    Let them challenge you
    You'll win as you always do
    Eyes open and see

    -hurdles are not obstruction but
    just challenges from your point of view

    She is born to fly
    Her feet unchained will leave ground
    She will reach the sky

    -I love they way you end it and yes
    you will reach the sky

    Overall i love the poem, It gives a very
    meaningful insight of how a determine person
    thinks.After reading it, i get the feeling that
    there is no limit on how high i can go.
    Wonderful Job;)

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Omg.What a wonderful poem sasha.It was absloutly fantastic and I really loved your soul of bravery,determenation and challenge just keep your self always determained because life needs a strong faithful human and Allah is always there for us.Wish I was strong as you are...

    Well done,keep it up...5\5...

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Always distinguished 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow. I really love how you described yourself as a person who CAN.
    This poem is really uplifting and im sure it would be good to read whenever you are feeling down.
    They told you, you can't
    But you are sure that you can
    Don't listen to them
    ^^ This shows an inner strength. A strength that will never die out.

    She is born to fly
    Her feet unchained will leave ground
    She will reach the sky
    ^^ This is just a really cute last stanza. It is positive and optimistic and I am sure, whatever it is you would like to do, whether it be touching the sky, you will accomplish it :]

    Awesome poem.
    5/5