Omg...i love this one...its perfect just the way it is...u dont need to change it or add anything...

As we continue to kiss
We begin to play the rest of the piece
But this time it wasn't just your song
It was now our love song...
^^this part is my fav..i love how u change it to "our song"...thats awesome
keep it up...
5/5
o its my new fav of ur's too