The only problem I found with this poem is the over used '...' Other than that you did a GREAT job on writing this poem and I really enjoyed reading it.

[Skipping pages, wanting the end
Never look back
Never take a glance.

Hesitating, pulses stopped
Thinking over
here's the chance.

Breath cut short, blood boiled red.
Hand in hand, there they go
Hopeless...

Choking in the saltiness, suffocating
Lips quivering
Restless

Pain tugging near the chest
Needles one by one they pierce
Pondering

Her smiles, your love - what about me?
Still wondering, but wonder no more
cause I still want to make the ending]