Wow. What a deep and meaningful poem. I got an immense sad feeling rush over me while reading your poem, which means it was really great because it really did transfer through to me.
Eerie sounds move through the trees
As gentle winds caress the leaves
^^ my favourite lines.. Your whole poem was worded really well, but these just stood out to me.
Keep up the fantastic work.
5/5

This is a dark one. You captured a graveyard in all its eerie sights and sounds at night. I get two different things from the last verse. One is that there is anger at someone and you wish them to burn in hell or you cannot believe they are dead and still wish them to burn in hell. At any rate, this is an excellent write and does make the reader think about what your words mean. Good job. 5/5

Amazing read, amazing write !
beautiful title, so catchy and ..oh well, I'm in love with everything about dark poems .
"in joy I cried"
what a wonderful ending phrase..I'm impressed really !
you're just as wonderful as your poetry :)

Write on <3

Grant this was really chilling , love good dark poems and this is a good one. I agree with TJ you ended it with a twist. Good luck in the contest.

Grant,

you murdering so and so!!! lol

A well written poem. Paced perfectly, building rhythm to a climatic conclusion, which was satisfyingly gruesome.

Well done.

Michael

Wow i love how you penned this poem. Your imaginary was great. The choice of words that you used really brought the errie atmosphere to the readers.Though i'm not really a big fan of dark poem but this poem really stood out for me.

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

This was simply beautifull.. the word were perfect and the flow was amazing...

5.5

Wow... like i really mean WOW!!! you have always had such an amazing and really unique style with such a stunning way of describing things. You can take really dark topics and through your words make them beautiful in their own dark way. a truly outstanding job, keep up the amazing work!!

*Shivers* nice poem, you got the graveyard scene allright, that was so cold I felt a chill through my spine... well done! 5/5

You know Grant,

I have read this poem many times and it is not written by the kind man I know.
I suppose you have some way to justify what you wrote and people who commented to it enjoyed it because they don't know whom it is written for.
Some "killings" are fun when all parties agree the verdict was right. But you know, my friend..so many people in this world are slaughtered like animals or put to death after years in death row and many years later they find out by using dna samples that they were innocent after all.
You should take a look inside and ask yourself what made you write this.
I have been hurt deeply so many times, but on my account you will find no poems that are aggressive, they only express the hurt I felt. We are all human Grant, with our flaws and virtues. Only God is perfect.

Ingrid

Thanks for the explanation Grant. Certain words are just unkown to me and therefore I misunderstood the message of the whole poem:)