Comments : Apart Of Me Has Gone

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Hey hun, great poem.. just a few things i noticed:
    Apart of me is gone,
    And it is never coming back,
    Apart of me left,
    When those words made me crack.
    ^^ should be A part. apart is like.. broken apart.. :)
    Apart of me broke,
    ^^ same here. A part.

    But with these word I will say,
    ^^
    words
    Other than that, a great poem.