Wow im quite amazed.You have done a great job in transfering ur feeling into words not to mention the flow was also great.This poem was such a delightful to read...i'm sure whoever you wrote for would be delighted to hear ur confessions;)Keep it up

Well i enjoyed this one for some reasons

frist the flow is excelent and the usage of words are easy , and simple

it si very easy to undertadn like the words are realy from the heart , simple talk from heart to heart that everyone understand .
everyone can relate and ask the same questions can be asked
great expression
simplicity and short stanzas are a great strategy . 5 /5