Comments : He Slipped Away From Me

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Very sad, yet wonderfully written oem.
    I can feel the emotion that you have put in writing this.
    Well done, great job

  • 15 years ago

    by Marissa Anne

    I love this poem i am so srry that if this happened to you but you got a great poem out of it......i love the lines
    "Your mouth opens quickly.
    And excuses start to flow.
    I can't help but feel sickly.
    I sigh and turn to go"
    these lines are soo true i cant wait to read your next poems!!!