Okay well to start with there were too places where it said "me" i dont know if you did that for a reason but it made me think it should me "my" .... now i know it might be hard but you should let your gf know the longer you wait the harder it will be.. great poem love your flow keep up the good work 5.5

Beautiful way to get your feelings out. I enjoyed reading it. Sounds like your in a tough position, I hope everything works out for you in the end, 5/5