Well done i really like this poem, lots of feeling and a good flow.

Wow this is a really sad poem. I think you shouldn't let things bother you though that's the worst part of letting someone get to you because it brings you down and breaks you and you don't need that kinda people in your life. but its good you can write about this and hopefully not do anything to hurt yourself. because that's never good. if you ever need anyone I'm here.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Powerful. Those people need to get over themselves and stop tearing others down cause their to damn unhappy with their own lives. Great work.
5/5

A world without you isn't a world worth living in my friend.

It was very well written tho, i must say.

x0x

Some people can be so cruel. Iknow what you are going through, 5/5. Em