Wow....that is really good =) I really liked it.

WOW... :)
Very sad... but a great job nevertheless!! :)

```Fingers point
Eyes stare
Love and hate
Neither is clear
--> I really love this. And I think it should be Love OR hate, Neither is clear. :)

Keep It Up!
5/5.

Awww excellent job on this. you put so much emotion into it, and the flow was pretty good. i loved it.

btw, thanks for the comment on my poem. =3