Ah, it was ever thus. Well done Fran. A beautiful day, yet that thing that keeps it from being perfect

An excellent poem Fran, you been reading my mind, lol. The wording was very imaginative, and struck a chord with me.
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Poets lament over one of lifes many delemas. An old R&B classic said,"Trying to love two, sho ain't easy to do". I guess not.
Nice poem that looks at the flip side of love, heartache,pain and confusion.

I can relate to this so muc, sometimes the one true love of our lives stays in our breath forever....

To love two people is an awful place to be. Well done.

The second poem I read by you and it also has the sea as an inspiration....maybe you live nea the sea also then?

To be torn between two lovers is awfull..I do not envy you at all..

Well written!

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid