Sadly enough i think we all have memories that will always eat us away... i hope you find peace in this at somepoint in like.. it might take a while to.. great job. 5.5

Not bad. i like the idea behind it but i think could have organized ur thoughts a little better.
the last stanza was rly good tho especially the line"when suspicions have proof" dunno why i just liked the sound of that and i like how u didnt finish the sentence in the last line