Wow never would i thought that the title could would be about you cutting yourself. the words that you choose really enables me to visualize the gore thing that you did. But i really love the twist though;)

Excellent Job

"If I caused myself some harm,
I bet it would not matter,
If I let blood run down my arm,
Your heart would not shatter""

i love that part.. i still remember feeling this way.. great job just should fix the computer mess ups it makes it hard to read...

5.5

The reader can sense your pain in these words you have expressed in this write, but hoping that there is no truth behind these words.

sadaddy

Interesting title.. it made me think the poem was going to be about something else. The poem had really good flow and rhyme for the most part, this stanza:
A tear falls down my face,
As I cut again too deep.
For you still havent noticed,
That you are the reason why I weep.
^^
i would cut out the why. It would better the flow i think.

Apart from that it was a really good write.
Never let a guy be the reason you hurt yourself hun.. no guy is worth your pain.
5/5

Wow. This is a sad, depressing poem. It brings together the cutting and the need to be noticed by 'the one'. I like the ending how you say 'I did my best' It really just ended the poem and left me with few questions on what was happening and if the story really was ended. Great job. 5.5

That was completely amazing i know exactly how that feels and the emotion represented in that was amazing. but sometimes its good that we dont do our best.

This is a really amazing poem, I actually felt relly sad when I read it. I like the misleading title, it really made me think it was about something else. This is very clever and I really enjoyed it.
5/5
Take care, I hope this is not true.

Wow another good one!