Wow...You have such a way with words! Most ABCB Schemes I write or have read are really short lines and hard to carry on, but this one, just WOW. Wonderful story, I like the repition and the illusions to the fictional or past or just unseen. Amazing job! 5/5

Hay, PoetryKnight here, great poem, kind of reminds me of the book the Magisians Nephew by C.S. Lewis, the wood between the world. again, love the poem, keep it up anbd I'll read more. lol.

PoetryKnight
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Aaron