I like this, it is an inspirationmal poem about hope and faith.

I believe that it could be tweaked a little, regarding the meter, I think it would impact better with the rhythm that meter would ive it. That said, I still feel that this is a good poem. PM me if you like, I will explain if you would like that.

Take care

Michael

I think this poem is great , therefore i'll add u as a favourite just so i can find u easy and read more of wat u have worte

HYE it is really a fanstic poem. it is full of life
it bring little simile on my painful heart.

5/5 from my side

I liked the idea in this piece. especially the optimism you tended to hold on to.
I have some things to criticize though:

#1: Your rhyme: went a bit cliche at some parts, like "me and "see", "defend" and "mend", "face" and "grace", not to mention that you repeated the same rhyme in the third stanza with "race" and "face".
I would like to say, make variety in your rhyme, for example the rhyme doesn't have to be full, you can try using the half rhyme, like "sight" and "confide", or like "part" and "spark" or "dark"..rhyme is optional, don't let it sound like it is forced or a must.

#2: The repetition: I noticed the repetition of the last word in the first line in the first word of the second line..it kinda gave me the hints that you didn't know how to word the poem.

#3: Some lines were too long for an AbAb rhyme that it made the flow go a bit off.

That's all I have to say, I hope you understand that rhyme is optional, forcing it is not the answer.
I really loved the idea of the piece though, you keep it up with keeping these things in mind.
Best of luck =)

These are inspiring verses which inspire everyone to follow the language of love.