Comments : Sand in Your Eyes.

  • 11 years ago

    by NoUr

    Well, hope you felt better after writting it :)
    and hope you'll stay together forever...

  • 11 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    WOW this poem is amazing I love it!!!!
    If you ever need to talk I'm here for you.
    This poem is on my Fav list!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    You took this poem on a trip, one that rides the oceans of emotions, and in the ship of creativity, and saiiled it far from the dead and greiving, and took it to a world where liturature is appreciated. 5/5 for this. From
    The PoetryKnight
    aka
    Aaron