Comments : The Renaissance Heartbreaker

  • 15 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    This was an interesting write not one I understand. Some poetry is like that to me, so don't be offended. I have one suggestion I am unsure if you did this purposely but I think you mean hear when you say So I can here the worlds tone.

  • 15 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Ah yes thank you it was a late night

  • 15 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful piece, filled with so much meaning. I love it from the beginning to the end. It paints such equally beautiful and heartbreaking picture.
    Whole poem is truly unique and refreshing. It seems simple, but it hides so many deeper emotions.
    Overall, greatly written piece.