Kind of hard to follow. A little confusing but REALLY cute! I liked the title, it had my head spinning on what the poem could be. Nice story, good rhyming, I give you a 4/5.

Im glad your poetry has given you peace of mind. There is no better thing to make yourself understand your own feelings, than poetry, i feel. To sit and sticky tape it all back together, must make it all that much more meaningful to you. Its great i think, that you are both willing to wait for each other, i think that proves maturity and strong love. Good luck to you both when you graduate.
The poems flow was quite good and well written.
5/5

Aww this was a cute poem, very well written but a bit hard to follow, left me a bit confused, but it was a great love poem
5/5
great job keep it up