Ah, lovely! You did this with so much grace:)
In the fifth line I think I counted 10 syllables, this could be fixed by simply removing the first word.
Very good this Tyburn!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid
ps: I love horses too!

Wow this was really cleverly written :]
I have a horse and the way your poem was described, really has inspired me to get back into it a little more.
Awesome poem!
5/5

This is really good, I havnt seen this style before =]
Nice job