Comments : Benumbed

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very hearfelt write ... I interpreted is as your write about the brave soldiers and their sacrifices and the uncaring attitude of rest of the cold-hearted humanity... I hope im correct :)

    beautifully penned... loved the imagery..

    "It twinkles in their star filled eyes
    A dream they pray will come
    While cold hearts lie here sleeping
    Praying to stay numb "

    ^^ these lines are so touching...

    wonderful write...