Great job honestly some people dont see love in front of them like u do I can relate to this but thats the past great write.

Our love was like telephone line,
That rustled, so we had to reconnect.

5/5

Wow, that's really different, comparing love to phone lines. That's pretty cool though, I would never have thought of writing a poem about this. It was a pretty sweet poem, and I can definitely relate to it. You had some nice catchy rhymes in here as well. The flow was up and down, but for the most part it was good. Keep it up!