A nice short poem. Again, I thought it was missing that WOW factor. All of the words were pretty plain and bland, but it still expressed your thought effectivly. In the very last stanza, WHERE YOU TO BLIND TO SEE; TO should be TOO.

Not really much else to say, sorry for a short comment. I liked the poem, but I though you were expressing a very mature emotion using very common words.

Not my favorite poem; sorry to be honest.

Keep on writing though!